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fitz's avatar

this is so beautiful

the stranger's avatar

Your way around words is spectacular. The poem and its hidden meanings reflected a deeper truth.

These verses got me thinking,

Details arenโ€™t necessarily the bits that form the whole, but also the shadows, the in-betweens, the reflections, rebirth, and destruction.

Beautiful and equally powerful, Mai :)

๐“›๐“ฎ๐“ธ๐“ท๐“ธ๐“ป๐“ช's avatar

Thanksss stranger, I appreciate u taking the time to read and comment<3

the stranger's avatar

ุงู„ุนููˆ. ูˆ ู„ูˆ ๐Ÿ™๐Ÿพ

Always my pleasure, Mai :)

Zara's avatar

i love this <3 i want to eat your poetry. that sounds weird

๐“›๐“ฎ๐“ธ๐“ท๐“ธ๐“ป๐“ช's avatar

aaa thanksss Zara, i love that compliment๐Ÿ˜ญ๐Ÿ’—

Lily's avatar

SO SO GOOD!! <3

Shahad's avatar

You have a beautiful way with words,

Loved this ๐Ÿฅน๐Ÿ’—

Yลซhi's avatar

HOLYYY so beautiful so cool mai!!

sajjar's avatar

so beautifully written. the god is perhaps in the details of this poem

sajjar's avatar

anytime <3

mahibah ๐™š โ€งโ‚Šหš's avatar

impeccable, once again mai ๐Ÿซถ๐Ÿฝ