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Shahad's avatar

Gorgeously written 😭

nya<3's avatar

ABSOLUTELY STUNNING

𝓛𝓮𝓸𝓷𝓸𝓻𝓪's avatar

Thanksss nya<333 it really means a lot <333

guluna ✧'s avatar

oh girl this is amazing!!💚

𝓛𝓮𝓸𝓷𝓸𝓻𝓪's avatar

aww thanksss it means a lot <333

Yūhi's avatar

this is so incredibly beautiful :(<33

𝓛𝓮𝓸𝓷𝓸𝓻𝓪's avatar

aww thanksss Yūhi <333

Elaa's avatar
Aug 8Edited

Your way with words …makes many feel seen, and I to see you 🤍

pari♡'s avatar

I loved this so much!

Fatima Daudzai 🧸🎀's avatar

Wow Mai this is incredibly beautiful. I'm curious as to what you intended for it to be about? I interpreted it as a loss of personhood and feeling invisible, all while hoping that the person inflicting those feelings might change. And it's possibly a cycle of abuse and false hope altogether?

𝓛𝓮𝓸𝓷𝓸𝓻𝓪's avatar

Thanks Fatima, it really means a lot. yeah, and I was trying to portray how suffocating that kind of dynamic is, to the point where a person feels claustrophobic even at the thought of air.

Fatima Daudzai 🧸🎀's avatar

I think you depicted that perfectly! 🫶🏻

M. Metzler's avatar

beautiful writing!!! <3